The pacing of these last few pages was kind drawn out now that I look back on them. But I wanted to give Aur and the reader time to digest the new setting before thrusting another character into the mix.
It didn’t make much sense to me to have Aur crawling over the bed in the old version, so in the new version, he continues to creep forward on foot. Yay for green glowies!
Ch2 Pg8
The pacing of these last few pages was kind drawn out now that I look back on them. But I wanted to give Aur and the reader time to digest the new setting before thrusting another character into the mix.
It didn’t make much sense to me to have Aur crawling over the bed in the old version, so in the new version, he continues to creep forward on foot. Yay for green glowies!
Redrawn: 1-1-2011
Original Art Here